My inner feelings

Manar 2005 (Abu dhabi)



When hatred occupies your heart
Murder thoughts come to a start

When ferocity dissolves in your blood
Stab is all you can do to see a flood

They say jabbing 90 times is rage at its worst
But that isn’t enough for my cells to burst

If a gun settles in one of my hands
And in the other a blade lands

I would shoot until holes fill the bones
And twinge until my arm drowns in red foams

Let’s review my dreams
Top is to see blood streams

Humanity would end if my lava decided to erupt
So, avoid opposing me or you’ll be first to corrupt

Limit yourself from playing with my nerves as I won’t ignore
And put an end to your actions for they boil my gore
Because if you don’t, then welcome to my world that is full of war

-Manar

About this poem

It brings out the rage and hatred in me as I have experienced so much hate in my life.

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Written on November 30, 2021

Submitted by manarmohammed554 on August 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD XX EE FF GGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 738
Words 154
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3

Manar

I have been writing poems since I was 15 years old, now I'm 17 and I have 74 poems but this is one of my favourites, I do have other favourites but I would like to see how this one would go. I'm currently a senior student studying in EPS school. more…

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