My inner feelings
Manar 2005 (Abu dhabi)
When hatred occupies your heart
Murder thoughts come to a start
When ferocity dissolves in your blood
Stab is all you can do to see a flood
They say jabbing 90 times is rage at its worst
But that isn’t enough for my cells to burst
If a gun settles in one of my hands
And in the other a blade lands
I would shoot until holes fill the bones
And twinge until my arm drowns in red foams
Let’s review my dreams
Top is to see blood streams
Humanity would end if my lava decided to erupt
So, avoid opposing me or you’ll be first to corrupt
Limit yourself from playing with my nerves as I won’t ignore
And put an end to your actions for they boil my gore
Because if you don’t, then welcome to my world that is full of war
-Manar
About this poem
It brings out the rage and hatred in me as I have experienced so much hate in my life.
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Written on November 30, 2021
Submitted by manarmohammed554 on August 19, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 738 |
Words | 154 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3 |
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