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A dream of paradise

Raymond Earl Thompson 1972 (Oakland)

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As I drive along the coast
It is haunted by ghosts
Ghosts of girls past
The endless summer was their dream
Now they rise from troubled slumber
The morning sun, it lights their way
far too long did they stay
To chase a dream always out of reach
Again, tonight they lie upon the beach
I shed a tear for them as I turn away
No more do I see them
Those who chose to stay

About this poem

An opinion about the youth seeking out unreasonable dreams.

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Written on August 15, 2022

Submitted on August 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFFGGFHF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 366
Words 76
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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