The Vines Inside



“There are vines inside your mother,”

Daddy says, “squeezing as they grow.

Tightening and taking and suffocating

Is all they’ve grown to know.”

“They wrap around her lifelines,”

Daddy says, “cutting off what’s left.

There’s not much there for them to have

For they’ve already taken all the rest.”

I blink my seven-year-old eyes

Startled by daddy’s words.

“How can there be plants in mommy?

Are there also fish and birds?”

Daddy shakes his head and says,

“No, baby, only the vines live inside.

Only for so much longer, though,

For mommy doesn’t have much time.”

“The doctors tell me just a month,”

Daddy says, as he tucks my hair behind my ear.

I swallow down a quiet sob

And wipe away his tears.

About this poem

This poem represents both innocence of a child being introduced to something as horrendous as cancer, and facing the loss of a parent, as well as the strength you can find in children when they’re faced with a parent in a state of vulnerability.

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Submitted by carissaconstantini1 on July 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme X A X A X X X X X B X B X X A X X X X X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 754
Words 158
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Carissa Constantini

I am from a small town in upstate NY, very far from any major city. I am still finding my feet in this world, and look forward to all the future experiences I have yet to have. I have a collie named Luna who lays at my feet evertime I write. more…

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  • matthewm.41686
    Hello! This is Matthew M., writing to wish you a merry Christmas and happy New Year. I realize this isn't the ideal way to contact you, but I couldn't find you elsewhere. I found your Christmas letter from 2014 in a bin of old papers, and it was very touching!

    You're incredibly heartfelt--even when those feelings hurt, as your poetry shows. I have a lot of respect for that, and I wish that I showed more appreciation for it when we were younger. Let me know if you'd like to get in touch!
     
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