Lauren



Just a moment to express gratitude
Thanks for a few fun nights of beverage brewed
Thanks for things I had yet to experience
Thanks for making me no longer delirious

I had fun, even so greatly brief
Out of my shell again, what relief
Stepping away from things of old
Trying new, venturing out, being bold

Toes in the water, swimming again
Moving along, not reveling in pain
Out of the zone and into the fire
Removed from safety, introvert's ire

Thanks for memories of many firsts
New places sampled and sated thirsts
Pinball was grand, cuisine delightful
A terrible Sunday, yet not spiteful

Moving along, sober mind now clear
Off to the future without cause to fear
Life is abundant, once again explorin'
I shall fondly remember our times
                                               Thank you Lauren

About this poem

About a woman I met and dated briefly

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Written on July 13, 2022

Submitted by TheDon on July 13, 2022

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABX CCDD EXXX XBFF GGEXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 805
Words 137
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 5

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