Trying to ask

Donald Carey 1980 (Montana)



Overcoming nerves,
Speaking from heart.
Situation serves,
A fresh new start.

Awkward conversation,
Leads to possibilities,
Hopeful consternation,
Rife with insecurities.

Speak beyond Hello,
Words fail to come.
Feigning calm and mellow,
Looking rather dumb.

Can barely speak,
Just one question.
Utterance won't leak,
Nervousness a bastion.

Just want to ask,
About a cup of coffee.
Up to the task,
With me.
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Written on March 19, 2022

Submitted by TheDon on March 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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4

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GCGC HIHI
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 408
Words 85
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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