Broken Heart



 I wish you could see my pain
amongst the other things buried in my brain.
  This place I’ve already left while you were unaware.
Though I might have been slightly unprepared.
   I flew.
I fought and found no joy.
I leapt.
I tried yet more of my soul did cry.
  Red filled my eyes not with love but with disdain.
for I knew this piece I could not obtain.
So here I will stay.
Here I will just stay and let it rain.

About this poem

A poem about the end of a love

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Written on October 15, 2021

Submitted by marshshugart on July 04, 2022

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCDEFGAAHA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 421
Words 94
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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