Analysis of Broken Heart



 I wish you could see my pain
amongst the other things buried in my brain.
  This place I’ve already left while you were unaware.
Though I might have been slightly unprepared.
   I flew.
I fought and found no joy.
I leapt.
I tried yet more of my soul did cry.
  Red filled my eyes not with love but with disdain.
for I knew this piece I could not obtain.
So here I will stay.
Here I will just stay and let it rain.


Scheme AABCDEFGAAHA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 01010110011 111010111001 111111001 11 110111 11 111111111 11111111101 1111111101 11111 111110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 421
Words 94
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 312
Words per stanza (avg) 83

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A poem about the end of a love

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Written on October 15, 2021

Submitted by marshshugart on July 04, 2022

Modified on March 11, 2023

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