i miss your winter



The sun, your attempt to hide the flakes,
Of the cold blizzard brainstorm.
The pain to watch it wash away,
And pretend your heart is warm.

I miss your winter, when I could see,
The reality in the snow.
The mask is back as spring rolls up,
And prettier flowers grow.

I used to stand in the drift’s and watch,
Now you hide pain behind the melt.
The storm was rough, but it was real.
The secret to how you felt.

The sting of the cold was too much for you,
But I took the bite with love.
The sun can’t wash away your fears,
Rather it covers them up like a glove.

You can’t hide the ice forever,
I would have withstood your blizzard.
If only you put your sun away,
I really miss your winter.

About this poem

Sometimes the best part of loving someone, is being able to help them through every season in their life. This poem is about the hurt that comes with not being able to express your true emotions, and how it can effect the people who love you as well.

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Submitted by inmymind8951 on June 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XABA XCXC XDXD XEXE FXBF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 697
Words 160
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Nili Hunter

I grew up in a family of 9. I am was the middle child for a long time (you know how it is ;) I use my poetry as a way to communicate experiences and emotions, as I find them hard to express with spoken words. Erin Hansen is my favorite poet... and I love reading just as much as I like creating stories myself! more…

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