Expiration date



The lie,
One day they’ll all be done with her.
They all leave, time and again.
She waits for when no one will come at all,
When she is most in need of a friend.

She’s the photographer, not the model.
She’s the friend, nothing more.
She’s the advice, but not the feelings.
She's not the ten, more like a four.

Her smile is never real,
What you see isn’t what you get.
The mirror whispers to her insecurities,
She is her own greatest regret.

Time limits scribbled across her face,
Shielding the tired girl in her mind.
The walls of her heart will never break,
She grew tough and cold inside.

Way in the back of her heart,
Where no one is there to hurt her,
Her very own visions of perfection,
Drown the truth of her real character.

Childhood comforts are now idioms,
Secular acceptance ruined satisfaction.
Dreams seem unreachable now,
Without the perfect body, or complection.

She can’t see loved ones waving to her,
Off the coast of anxiety’s ocean.
She closes her eyes when loyalty is close,
Refusing to express her emotion.

Her love is confined to a potion’s bottle,
Placed in a cabinet of doubt.
An expiration date she chose herself,
False numbers on the side, whittled out.

When will she realize that's not what everyone sees?
A small child, crippled and afraid.
Through the beholder’s lens, they spot a queen!
Pity is a dangerous game.

She is blindly leading herself down a path,
Where no one can answer her call.
Look past the ideals of acceptance,
What they have, you have it all!

There is more to you than meets your eye,
Find a different lie to tell.
Beauty of the heart doesn’t expire.
It never has, and it never will.

About this poem

This poem is about the endless cycle of feeling like you’re not enough. The fear of being left behind, as if you have some expiration date hanging over your head.

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Written on November 04, 2022

Submitted by inmymind8951 on November 10, 2022

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDX EFXF XGHG XXXX XBIB XIXC BIXI EJXJ HXXX XDXD AXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,658
Words 351
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Nili Hunter

I grew up in a family of 9. I am was the middle child for a long time (you know how it is ;) I use my poetry as a way to communicate experiences and emotions, as I find them hard to express with spoken words. Erin Hansen is my favorite poet... and I love reading just as much as I like creating stories myself! more…

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  • lovingempath
    I often try to capture many of these same feelings, but haven't been as successful as you are here. I also appreciate the unique metaphors and the fact that the pace with rhythm and rhyme never drag. The ending wrapped everything into a perfect package for me. Thank you for this and good luck :). 
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  • ccooper85228
    I can identify with the content. This poem is unique with phrases like “cabinet of doubt.” The author is creative and puts words together in a beautiful and unusual way. This was the most unique poem that I read. 
    LikeReply1 year ago

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