Love Eternal

Lynn Birli 1953 (Rye NY)



My True Loves in my life. There have been some superficial and some real!!
    My first love has always been the only one that has stayed in my heart since the day I met him. How can this be? I know that my heart was captured, and enveloped
 with his heart
  as if the
 His loving spirit of him reached into me. and took a hold of my spirit..
  captured and amazed by this
I realized the innermost power being of his love
his heart which words can not express completely, if I reached in my heart it would take forever to describe the love and compassion in the recipe of oneness...
to have these feelings are a perfect match in the realm of love..
they lead to a place called paradise, a dome that's unattainable, and can only be entered with a key.
the key is love~ that leads~ to a place where there is no judgment or corrections...
freedom of pleasure
with passion created for the man and woman
 that holds no boundaries ~
it is a real place~
only given to the chosen~of paradise!!!

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My First Love

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Written on September 18, 1990

Submitted by butterflylynn8 on June 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHGIJKLMNO
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 989
Words 196
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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The words flow from my heart to my pen to my paper. I love Poetry and I love Love. Gifts to me from above. more…

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