Immortal
I wallow in the muddy bog of despair
I weep beneath the willow
My thoughts twisting like a river that bends over itself
Again and again
The sky turns gray
The heavens unleash the dogs of hell
I am soaked to the bone
And deep in the throes
I walk the path of trail blazers past
And climb a mountain to the top where the trees won’t grow
Standing on a rocky ledge
Looking at the creator’s creation
I am humbled
With my hands balled into fists
Wrapped in self-pity, loathing and fear
I pummel the horizon
And give a primordial scream
Its echo bouncing into eternity
And tearing a hole through my wearied heart
Emotionally spent, I gasp for air
It is pure, not polluted by the polluter
The taste is like nothing and everything
In the presence of angels, touched by the immortal
I, a mere mortal am reborn
About this poem
This poem is about life, it's up and downs.
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Written on February 22, 2022
Submitted by lisacampbell29 on May 23, 2022
Modified on April 25, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABXX XXXX XBXCX XXCXXX AXXXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 811 |
Words | 158 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 5, 6, 5 |
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