COLDER



 She is colder than
Most with emotions.
   With her it's just going
Through the motions.

  Her wanton ways and
Perfect figure.
  No hesitation when she
Pulls the trigger.

  Her tan skin and
Dark eyes.
  BEWARE! A word
To the wise.

  Her full lips,
Her long fingernails.
  She is 100%
Bone-a-fide female.

  You smile when you
See her look.
  You're guessing, she is
A closed book.

  Her radiant smile sets
You at ease.
  The way she moves,
With expertise.

  She is at her weakest
In the morning.
  She never prepares when
She hears the warning.

  No matter what,
A smile on her face.
  It's like she has
Fallen from grace.

  You can envy her
Lack of attention.
  Easy going, calm,
No sign of tension.

  No emotions show
In her eyes.
  No hint of confusion,
Or look of surprise.

  She is not stuck-up
Doesn't brag or boast.
  Be careful,
She is colder than most.

      Turbo1904 ♥

About this poem

Loving someone who is cold as ice.

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Written on June 01, 2022

Submitted by Turbo1904 on June 02, 2022

Modified on April 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCB DEXE DFXF XXGX XHGH XIXI XCCC XJXJ EAXA XFAF XKXK
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 896
Words 195
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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