A breaking mind



Did you hear about the girl who lost her mind
She lost it when he died
He was her everything
And she was left with nothing
No wonder she was delusional
You ostracized her
when she needed to hold someone close
She Turned schizophernic so she wouldn't be alone
But you went and disturbed her
In her fantasy world
She never came out of that hole
Thats the only way she could see her lover
She ran away from the institution
Because the pills made her not see him
She just sat and stared
All she wanted was to see his face
Everyday but you didn't allow it
Cause it went against society rules
But with this you left me with no one
You left me no one to talk to
And now I sit and stare at this blank room

About this poem

I was inspired by Taylor Swift song right where you left me

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Written on February 24, 2022

Submitted by Serendipity on May 10, 2022

Modified on March 21, 2023

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Scheme ABCCDEFGEHIEJKLMNOJPQ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 704
Words 148
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21

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