Analysis of A breaking mind



Did you hear about the girl who lost her mind
She lost it when he died
He was her everything
And she was left with nothing
No wonder she was delusional
You ostracized her
when she needed to hold someone close
She Turned schizophernic so she wouldn't be alone
But you went and disturbed her
In her fantasy world
She never came out of that hole
Thats the only way she could see her lover
She ran away from the institution
Because the pills made her not see him
She just sat and stared
All she wanted was to see his face
Everyday but you didn't allow it
Cause it went against society rules
But with this you left me with no one
You left me no one to talk to
And now I sit and stare at this blank room


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Poetic Form
Metre 11101011101 111111 11010 0111110 110110100 1100 11101111 1111110101 1110010 001001 11011111 10101111010 110110010 010110111 11101 111011111 1011110011 1110101001 111111111 11111111 0111011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 704
Words 148
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 555
Words per stanza (avg) 141

About this poem

I was inspired by Taylor Swift song right where you left me

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Written on February 24, 2022

Submitted by Serendipity on May 10, 2022

Modified on March 21, 2023

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