Hope Springs



The voice reached back into a past
where we had birthed our hopes.

A late night call from a friend no more.
He wanted to talk.

We had nothing to say,
so we said it again and again.

Where did your hopes take you, he asked.
Not where they promised, I said.

Mine died slowly like a departing dirge.
His left him hoping on his children’s children.

We yearned to return to our fragmented memories
where life was endlessly earnest,

where friendships started to die,
and promises made to be broken.

It’s hard to keep new hopes alive,
when the old ones never arrived.

©Brian Cummings

About this poem

I wrote this poem after a late night call from a childhood friend

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Written on April 21, 2022

Submitted by Briancummingssr on April 21, 2022

Modified on March 31, 2023

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Scheme XX XX XX XX XA XX XA XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 591
Words 129
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Brian Cummings

Brian Cummings has written and self-published two cookbooks and countless articles, press releases and speeches over a long career in journalism and public relations. His poems have been published in the Ariel Chart International Literary Journal, Stick Figure, and one was featured in the April 2022 issue of cc&d magazine. He is retired and lives near Dallas. more…

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