Are you fine
There are days i wake up in so much pain
I try to scream but nothing comes out.
I feel a tightness around my chest
like a string tied tightly around my heart
My breathing shallow in despair
Like a caged bird gasping for its last breath
I lay there silenty waiting for the feeling to pass
Tears rest at the corner of my eyes refusing to fall
I whisper your name over and over again
Hoping you might hear me, calling you out
I crave for your touch in the lonely night
Feeling you close; it only feels right
I wish i could feel your hands in my hair
Your mouth hungry; telling me you're mine
The weight of your body crushing down on me
Your soul making love to mine
I pray for a miracle to happen just this time
Closing my eyes once again, i tell myself im fine
Are you fine too?
About this poem
Loving and losing
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Submitted by Fiaa on April 10, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AB XX CX XX AB DD CE XE XE X |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 788 |
Words | 169 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
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