Are you fine



There are days i wake up in so much pain
I try to scream but nothing comes out.

I feel a tightness around my chest
like a string tied tightly around my heart

My breathing shallow in despair
Like a caged bird gasping for its last breath

I lay there silenty waiting for the feeling to pass
Tears rest at the corner of my eyes refusing to fall

I whisper your name over and over again
Hoping you might hear me, calling you out

I crave for your touch in the lonely night
Feeling you close; it only feels right

I wish i could feel your hands in my hair
Your mouth hungry; telling me you're mine

The weight of your body crushing down on me
Your soul making love to mine

I pray for a miracle to happen just this time
Closing my eyes once again, i tell myself im fine

Are you fine too?

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Loving and losing

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Submitted by Fiaa on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XA XX BX XX XA CC BD XD XD X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 788
Words 169
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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