Analysis of Are you fine



There are days i wake up in so much pain
I try to scream but nothing comes out.

I feel a tightness around my chest
like a string tied tightly around my heart

My breathing shallow in despair
Like a caged bird gasping for its last breath

I lay there silenty waiting for the feeling to pass
Tears rest at the corner of my eyes refusing to fall

I whisper your name over and over again
Hoping you might hear me, calling you out

I crave for your touch in the lonely night
Feeling you close; it only feels right

I wish i could feel your hands in my hair
Your mouth hungry; telling me you're mine

The weight of your body crushing down on me
Your soul making love to mine

I pray for a miracle to happen just this time
Closing my eyes once again, i tell myself im fine

Are you fine too?


Scheme XA XX BX XX XA CC BD XD XD X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110111 111111011 110100111 1011100111 11010001 1011101111 111110101011 11101011101011 110111001001 1011111011 1111100101 101111011 1111111011 111010111 01111010111 1110111 1110100110111 101110111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 788
Words 169
Sentences 2
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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Loving and losing

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Submitted by Fiaa on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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