Our Thoughts Are A Link



My thoughts have hopped right out
They all jumped off a bridge
Friends that think alike  
That's where my thoughts now live

Cracking at the vision
And breaking at the thought
That my sentences are to scary
And away you'll slowly walk

Because as you hover under
The bridge that is my head
My melancholy thoughts
All seem to want me dead

You hold my precious wishes
But it was suicide that linked
Without my thoughts a broken
Would our friendship float or sink?
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Submitted by Sproutheadedhurt on April 28, 2022

Modified by Sproutheadedhurt on April 28, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX AXXX XBXB XXAX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 464
Words 89
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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