Where are your shoes?

Jonathan Slaton 1954 (United States)

March 22 


Where did your shoes go?  Where could they be?
Are they under the bed or up in a tree?
How could your shoes have wandered so far?
To the back of the couch or inside the car?
Sometimes they scatter like kittens, I know,
One next to the sink and one under the snow.
Oh!  Look here, I found them, they’re inside this box
Now wait just a minute, so where are your socks?

About this poem

Written one evening after taking care of my twin granddaughters (age 18 months) The shoe locations are only slightly exaggerated.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on October 12, 2021

Submitted by jchslaton on March 20, 2022

Modified on May 01, 2023

24 sec read
99

Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 368
Words 80
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8

Jonathan Slaton

Jonathan Slaton, a retired IT nerd who dabbles in poetry. more…

All Jonathan Slaton poems | Jonathan Slaton Books

3 fans

Discuss the poem Where are your shoes? with the community...

5 Comments
  • lovingempath
    You have an excellent ability to add just a touch of humor to 'life' here :)
    LikeReply12 months ago
  • brent_b
    I love it. This is very much my style.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • JoelP
    Clever and made me chuckle. Well done :)
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • triskit
    I love the whimsey of the poem. I am a sucker for rhyme so that plus the light subject matter just made me feel very happy when reading it. Well done!
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • johnc.22519
    It's the only children's poem I found in the collection, and it could be enjoyed by a child. I like the rhyme and metre and I think that a poet who can write like that is almost certainly capable of producing more similarly entertaining poems, so Poetry.com should encourage her/him with a prize. 
    LikeReply 12 years ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"Where are your shoes?" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 25 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/124446/where-are-your-shoes?>.

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

April 2024

Poetry Contest

Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
5
days
1
hour
29
minutes

Special Program

Earn Rewards!

Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

Browse Poetry.com

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
The pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in a poem is called _______.
A rhyme
B meter
C verse
D rhythm