Memories

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  AIDA

  I absolutely love the way you paint a picture with your words! "The darkest fears levitates me onto the looms of death" is such a powerful and engaging opening line. Your use of vivid imagery and strong metaphors throughout the poem really drew me in, and I found myself completely swept away by the emotions you conveyed.
  
  I particularly enjoyed the way you juxtaposed the darker elements of the poem with the more uplifting memories of euphoria and extol. It added a great sense of balance to the piece, and made the lighter moments shine even more brightly against the backdrop of fear and shadows.
  
  If I may offer a suggestion, I would maybe look at refining your line breaks a little bit. While I appreciate the use of enjambment to create a sense of flow and continuity, there were a few moments where the line breaks felt a little abrupt or awkward.
  
  Overall, though, I just want to say how much I enjoyed reading your work! You have a true talent for poetic expression, and I can't wait to see what you create next. Keep up the amazing work! more »

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