Promise to fix



Hey Love,

I’m kind of lost right now.

I’m frightened with the tone of your WOW!

Scared to loose you again

I don’t know how to fix it, to regain

I know it sucks to have someone like me

But trust me, I am a believer of monogamy

Sorry to leave you in the middle of our discussion

I can’t handle conflicts well, it gives me concussion.

Sorry for avoiding you, when you were angry

I know, I am such a misery

I‘m horrified, what if my explanation will upset you more

But now I will try to make you feel secure



You’re like my permanent downloaded songs

Who is always with me in my right and wrong

I may not listen to it everyday

I have taken it granted that I can say

But I only download if I love it not just like

I have saved that place for you, my would be bride

You cheered me up in my lonely times

I would like to do the same, my sunshine.

I will never give up on our relationship

But I also won’t behave like that creep



You’re my Netflix and Prime,

I can watch you whole day if I have time

You are and will be always my partner in crime

In this whole world of grime

I know it annoys you that I my busy most of time

I wish to change the scene, in the pantomime

Don’t worry ever because you are my front line

This seat is booked forever, you will be always my sublime

You are important in my tough climb

Also, when I’m sitting near the beach with a wine



Hey Love

This is what I wanted to say

I hope little pressure is now taken away.

Still I’m shaken with your tone

But hoping that now you are not feeling alone

I can’t afford to loose you again

So, I promise to fix all your pain

About this poem

It's about a person who wants to fix their relationship. He was trying to express his feelings. He never fell out of love, but he doesn't know how to show his passion for her. He also sometimes takes her for granted.

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Submitted by shilpi_s on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A B C D D E E D D X X X X F F X X X G X X H H H H H H G H H G F F I I B C
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,652
Words 382
Stanzas 38
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Shilpi Sarkar

I love to write about hope and emotion: Hope and feelings central themes in my stories, poems, blogs and thoughts. I am Shilpi and welcome to this realm of expressions. I have many interests, including reading, dancing, illustration, photography, and learning new things, but my two favourites are travelling and writing. "Can't change the world with my roar, so using a few of my metaphors". more…

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