Promise to fix
Shilpi Sarkar 1992 (Durgapur)
Hey Love,
I’m kind of lost right now.
I’m frightened with the tone of your WOW!
Scared to loose you again
I don’t know how to fix it, to regain
I know it sucks to have someone like me
But trust me, I am a believer of monogamy
Sorry to leave you in the middle of our discussion
I can’t handle conflicts well, it gives me concussion.
Sorry for avoiding you, when you were angry
I know, I am such a misery
I‘m horrified, what if my explanation will upset you more
But now I will try to make you feel secure
You’re like my permanent downloaded songs
Who is always with me in my right and wrong
I may not listen to it everyday
I have taken it granted that I can say
But I only download if I love it not just like
I have saved that place for you, my would be bride
You cheered me up in my lonely times
I would like to do the same, my sunshine.
I will never give up on our relationship
But I also won’t behave like that creep
You’re my Netflix and Prime,
I can watch you whole day if I have time
You are and will be always my partner in crime
In this whole world of grime
I know it annoys you that I my busy most of time
I wish to change the scene, in the pantomime
Don’t worry ever because you are my front line
This seat is booked forever, you will be always my sublime
You are important in my tough climb
Also, when I’m sitting near the beach with a wine
Hey Love
This is what I wanted to say
I hope little pressure is now taken away.
Still I’m shaken with your tone
But hoping that now you are not feeling alone
I can’t afford to loose you again
So, I promise to fix all your pain
About this poem
It's about a person who wants to fix their relationship. He was trying to express his feelings. He never fell out of love, but he doesn't know how to show his passion for her. He also sometimes takes her for granted.
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Submitted by shilpi_s on January 09, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,652 |
Words | 382 |
Stanzas | 38 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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