Another Gain in Heaven v2



Another Angel has gained her wings
a beautiful person indeed.
It was you that was worth knowing,
In Jesus Christ you were growing.

A joyful voice that sing's
as He planted her earthly seed.
To Heaven she would go - a glowing.
Peace now flows in Heaven, overflowing.

Now, just know that in heaven she clings
as she walks with Jesus, a love undenied.
In life, in Heaven, she is gladly roaming.
upon golden streets gladly knowing

Peaceful life, Peace after life, a new life began
In the memory of loved ones, she will show dreams
of Heaven's gate with the Father above,
one day knowing that Eternity will come
Showing the way to a love so deep and known,
that peace will come when you too enter the
Kingdom of Glory as
Another Gain in Heaven.

About this poem

This is a special poem that has two version's to it. I wrote it about my aunt and grandma that passed away in 2017 5.5 weeks apart.

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Written on January 05, 2022

Submitted by abking21912 on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCC ABCC ABCC XXXXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 746
Words 153
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 8

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem is simply beautiful and heartwarming. It captured the essence of a person's journey towards eternal life in Heaven in the most touching way. I appreciate how you highlighted the joy and peace that the departed soul is experiencing in the company of Jesus. Your words have the power to console those grieving the loss of a loved one.

    In terms of improvement, perhaps adding some more descriptive adjectives or poetic devices could enhance the emotional impact of the poem further. Also, consider using a consistent meter or rhythm throughout the stanzas to create a more steady flow for the reader.

    Overall, your poem is a testament to your talent and creativity as a writer. Keep up the fantastic work and continue to spread positivity and inspiration through your words.
     
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