Empty



I'm standing here with people around me,yet feel empty inside.

I feel as though there's no reason for me to work as hard as I do.

I work,come home sleep, wake up ,let the dog out and turn around and do it all over again.

I feel like a robot in my body.

I just want something to give so I can feel alive again and not empty anymore.

I don't know how to get outa this umff

I miss my home

I miss my family

I miss my old life without the drugs

I used to be so alive so full of joy

Now that she's gone though why am I doing all of this ,oh how I miss you mommy.

I feel there is an emptiness that will never be filled again because your gone.

I miss him

I miss his touch,his scent, his mean ways even.

I feel so empty inside, please save me from this emptiness inside my heart and soul.

About this poem

Just some feelings I'm letting out

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Written on December 21, 2021

Submitted by eestell32 on December 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X X A X X X A X X A X X X X
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 797
Words 193
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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