Analysis of Empty
I'm standing here with people around me,yet feel empty inside.
I feel as though there's no reason for me to work as hard as I do.
I work,come home sleep, wake up ,let the dog out and turn around and do it all over again.
I feel like a robot in my body.
I just want something to give so I can feel alive again and not empty anymore.
I don't know how to get outa this umff
I miss my home
I miss my family
I miss my old life without the drugs
I used to be so alive so full of joy
Now that she's gone though why am I doing all of this ,oh how I miss you mommy.
I feel there is an emptiness that will never be filled again because your gone.
I miss him
I miss his touch,his scent, his mean ways even.
I feel so empty inside, please save me from this emptiness inside my heart and soul.
Scheme | X X X A X X X A X X A X X X X |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 110111001111001 11111110111111111 1111111011010101111001 111010110 111101111110101011001 111111111 1111 111100 111110101 11111011111 11111111101111111110 11111100111011010111 111 1111111110 111100111111100011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 797 |
Words | 193 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 40 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 11 |
About this poem
Just some feelings I'm letting out
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Written on December 21, 2021
Submitted by eestell32 on December 21, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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