Analysis of Empty



I'm standing here with people around me,yet feel empty inside.

I feel as though there's no reason for me to work as hard as I do.

I work,come home sleep, wake up ,let the dog out and turn around and do it all over again.

I feel like a robot in my body.

I just want something to give so I can feel alive again and not empty anymore.

I don't know how to get outa this umff

I miss my home

I miss my family

I miss my old life without the drugs

I used to be so alive so full of joy

Now that she's gone though why am I doing all of this ,oh how I miss you mommy.

I feel there is an emptiness that will never be filled again because your gone.

I miss him

I miss his touch,his scent, his mean ways even.

I feel so empty inside, please save me from this emptiness inside my heart and soul.


Scheme X X X A X X X A X X A X X X X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110111001111001 11111110111111111 1111111011010101111001 111010110 111101111110101011001 111111111 1111 111100 111110101 11111011111 11111111101111111110 11111100111011010111 111 1111111110 111100111111100011101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 797
Words 193
Sentences 9
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

Just some feelings I'm letting out

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Written on December 21, 2021

Submitted by eestell32 on December 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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