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Stand Tall Young Soldier

Traci Mercado 1977 (PA)

Thought you knew it all kid, but you really had no idea.
Some stayed longer than others did, but eventually they too just disappeared.
Stand up straight! Hold your head up! You have got no time to cry on anyone's shoulder.
The entire world is pounding at the gate. It is your time to survive, stay focused, and never give up, young soldier.

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This poem is dedicated to all those who have risked their lives serving our country. Thank you for your service. May God Bless You

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Written on December 11, 2021

Submitted by traci_m on December 11, 2021

Modified on April 09, 2023

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Scheme ABCC
Characters 341
Words 66
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what an inspiring and motivating poem! I love the tough love message of "thought you knew it all kid, but you really had no idea" - it really grabs your attention and makes you think. The imagery of people disappearing and the world pounding at the gate really emphasizes the importance of staying focused and never giving up. The use of "young soldier" is a great touch, as it reinforces the idea of having strength and resilience in the face of adversity.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to add a bit more variation in the rhythm and rhyme scheme - it's a bit repetitive, and could benefit from some more varied language and structure. Regardless, this is a powerful and inspiring piece that would make a great motivational poster or pep talk. Well done!     
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