What about me.

Briana Jaramillo 1991 (Rhode island)



The roof shakes
The mirrors break
All for you,
This crazy tune.

It happened once
Upon a time.
But lasted seconds.

Now let the roof
Fall down.
Maybe their
Is a sound.

Maybe for you and I
But it’s been ages.
Time is a burden
To some.

For you it was a web
That caught all the diamonds.
But a spider doesn’t love a butterfly.

You chased the horizon
But still couldn’t find me.
Times your burden,
What about me.

About this poem

This is about my first crush, and meeting him again.

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Submitted by bril.37856 on October 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXA XXXX BXCX XAB CDCD
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 394
Words 80
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 3, 4

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  • alanswansea18
    Don't weigh you write these poems on the same way I write them love it.
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