To Stare at the Wall
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Have you ever really stared at the wall
I mean, like REALLY stare at the wall
To the point that the world goes blurry
Siting still but my thoughts still run
The world I’ve come up with in my head isn’t blurry but the thoughts are running fast
When I catch myself really staring at the wall
I realize just how pointless my existence has become
Let’s look at it for what it is
My lungs expand and retract
My heart beats. My brain is firing off neurons…
But I’m still not living
In my eyes… that looks like wasted energy
There is something. Or someone out there that could really use this wasted energy
Something. Someone, with purpose
That’s not just breathing but, is actually living.
About this poem
Disclaimer: TRIGGER WARNING ⚠️ if you are disturbed by -Severe mental Illness -Suicidal Thoughts Please click away. Viewer Discretion is Advised This piece is like a spoken word kind of thing. Freestyle poem.
Written on October 29, 2021
Submitted by Jae_Succa on October 29, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | X AABXX AX XXXC BB XC |
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,041 |
Words | 154 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 5, 2, 4, 2, 2 |
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