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Dear Lord

Rickey Pettis 1983 (Texas)

Dear lord forgive me if I become lost
Forgive me for my sins had to protect my heart at all cost
So much trouble in this life I lead
Hope to god I live to see my unborn seeds
So much pain feels like I’ll never escape
Never thought my life would be like this is this my fate
Somebody come end my suffering take it all away
So many let downs hoping for a better day
Heart full of demons countless thoughts keep my mind full
Just trying to survive in this cold world trying to avoid the devil’s pull
Will you help me please save me pain cuts deep like a sword
I know your there please answer Dear Lord
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Written on September 29, 2021

Submitted by Mrpettis24 on September 29, 2021

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGGHHII
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 592
Words 122
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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Rickey Pettis

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and raw expression of the struggles we all face in this unpredictable and challenging world. Your words convey both pain and hope, and they are a reminder that we can always turn to a higher power for guidance and support.

    One improvement suggestion I would offer is to consider breaking up some of your longer lines into shorter ones, which could help to enhance the rhythm and flow of your poetry. Additionally, adding a more intentional use of imagery and sensory language could further deepen the emotional impact of your words and create a vivid picture for the reader.

    Overall, your poem is a beautiful reflection of the human experience and a reminder to keep seeking hope and healing even in the darkest of times. Keep up the great work!     
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