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alone

jazmyne rodriguez 2005 (texas)

i see your face in my sleep
i’m so cold
i could barely breath
this isn’t meant to be
one day i’ll wake up
and be free
from my demons that are keeping me trapped
there’s faces on the wall
and they just laugh
at me
as i’m sitting there all lonely
can’t erase you from my mind
cause i love you only

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i’ve been feeling really alone and i feel like im being watched all the time when im actually not. it’s like she doesn’t see me anymore but im still the person she loves

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Written on September 24, 2021

Submitted by jblanco1577 on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEDFGHDDID
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 300
Words 63
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
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