Analysis of alone

jazmyne rodriguez 2005 (texas)



i see your face in my sleep
i’m so cold
i could barely breath
this isn’t meant to be
one day i’ll wake up
and be free
from my demons that are keeping me trapped
there’s faces on the wall
and they just laugh
at me
as i’m sitting there all lonely
can’t erase you from my mind
cause i love you only


Scheme ABCDEDFGHDDID
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 111 11101 11111 11111 011 1110111011 110101 0111 11 11101110 1011111 111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 300
Words 63
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 227
Words per stanza (avg) 63

About this poem

i’ve been feeling really alone and i feel like im being watched all the time when im actually not. it’s like she doesn’t see me anymore but im still the person she loves

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Written on September 24, 2021

Submitted by jblanco1577 on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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