Rate this poem:3.5 / 2 votes

Writing



I sit,I think, my words gathered in order stink!
Maybe I should seek a shrink or create a lie to sell a link?
It comes to others so easily it seems to me words are like a dream!!!
I want the best lines to appear to my reader ahhhh my mind is on that hummingbirds feeder!!
So much beauty, so much in a day, I can’t really think of nothing to say!!!
My minds racing now, but still I cuss out loud; looking for sweet droppings of nothings to speak to my crowd!!!
…So still I sit & still I think man just call it writers block inc.!!!!

About this poem

Writers Block

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on September 16, 2021

Submitted by Ghat1980 on September 16, 2021

32 sec read
137

Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCDEA
Characters 538
Words 109
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7

Gabriel Hatfield

In 2001 I put 3 poems in a Rolling Stones magazine contest made the top 25 and was published but I was incarcerated and never was settled to care where but older now I think I’m ready to write more. more…

All Gabriel Hatfield poems | Gabriel Hatfield Books

2 fans

Discuss this Gabriel Hatfield poem with the community:

2 Comments
  • ludy_b
    Writers block starts when you don't let the thoughts grow into ideas.
    LikeReply 11 year ago
  • Soulwriter
    Nice, I like it :)
    LikeReply 11 year ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"Writing" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2023. Web. 28 Mar. 2023. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/109708/writing>.

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

More poems by

Gabriel Hatfield

»

March 2023

Poetry Contest

Enter our monthly contest for the chance to win cash prizes and gain recognition for your talent.
3
days
2
hours
21
minutes

Browse Poetry.com

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
Poet George McDonald wrote a two-word poem that reads _____ _____?
  • A. Let's Go.
  • B. Come Home.
  • C. See You!
  • D. Good Bye.