Analysis of Writing



I sit,I think, my words gathered in order stink!
Maybe I should seek a shrink or create a lie to sell a link?
It comes to others so easily it seems to me words are like a dream!!!
I want the best lines to appear to my reader ahhhh my mind is on that hummingbirds feeder!!
So much beauty, so much in a day, I can’t really think of nothing to say!!!
My minds racing now, but still I cuss out loud; looking for sweet droppings of nothings to speak to my crowd!!!
…So still I sit & still I think man just call it writers block inc.!!!!


Scheme AABCDEA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111100101 1011101101011101 111101100111111101 1101110111101111111010 1110110011110111011 1110111111110111011011111 111111111111011
Characters 538
Words 109
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 57
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 399
Words per stanza (avg) 108

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Writers Block

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Written on September 16, 2021

Submitted by Ghat1980 on September 16, 2021

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Gabriel Hatfield

In 2001 I put 3 poems in a Rolling Stones magazine contest made the top 25 and was published but I was incarcerated and never was settled to care where but older now I think I’m ready to write more. more…

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