Eldon Avenue



Comforting Words

Mom won't see the season's change,
I said to my husband Ken
she so loved to  watch the colours of fall and when the
                     snow would begin.
My husband held me tightly and said "she still sees them     
                     hon'
don't worry about your Mother...God wouldn't let her
                  miss ---a single one.
She's seeing the brilliant colours, the maple turning from
                  green to red
She'll see the snowflakes gently fall...think ....on what I've
                       said.
I gazed up at the autumn sky and flock of birds flew
                      high above
I thought about what he had said..... with a voice so full
                     of love.
I dried my tearstained face knowing he was right
God wouldn't let my Mother....miss such a beautiful
                     sight.
Somewhere in God's Heaven, the seasons come and
                     go
and to think that Mothers sees too....is comforting to   
                    know.
So when the first of the snowflakes fall and the season
                    changes a'gin
I'll think about the words he said...she sees...each
                    season begin.

written by me Norma J. Suddard  Oct. 4 1994.

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote way back in 2002. Mya books are filled with stories and poems. I have been published several times a few years ago with several other poems. I won a large silver cup a medal and 2 other awards for my poetry work. I love to write and things just seem to pop into my mind and out comes a story or poem.. Norma J. Suddard

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Written on October 07, 1994

Submitted by norma.suddard on August 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXAXXXBXCXCDEXEFXFXGDGBAXA X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,203
Words 179
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 27, 1

Norma Suddard

Previously wrote tons of poems. This is only one of so many poems that I couldn't stop writing. I would just imagine in my mind about something or see a piece of broken shard and out came a poem. I have so many, many poems and stories in my books --several binders of poetry, stories and thoughts. I have over 2 large binders of poetry and more than 8 binders on stories I have written. I just see something or think about something and out comes a poem or story. I have also done Ancestry since 2004. My binders take up hugh shelves on both stories and poems. I am in about 10 books of poetry alone never mind the stories. I love to write. Most of my poems are rhymes but there are others that tell a story. Norma J. Suddard more…

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