God help me endure

Holly Flame Maxey 1976 (baltimore)



True progress is slow  

Torturous to the soul, body & mind

Yet, holds promise for a better tomorrow

For a better future

I pray every day for the strength  

To withstand this pressure

 

I thought the old man died

But apparently, he still has a hold on me

I need to let him go, before I can be free

I need to let him go, before I becomes, “US”

 

As much as I am pained by this  

Mental arrangement with the old man

He has owned me for so long

I am not sure I know how

 

To let Go

About this poem

Life may be hard...but death is harder... we should all be patient the end is worth the pain

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Submitted on July 22, 2021

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Scheme A X A B X B X C C X X X X X A
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 479
Words 100
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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