Promises



I get butterflies in my stomach,
When I talk to you
It's obvious I get really shy,
Hoping you feel the same way to
I think you're perfect and amazing,
Who ever you marry is gonna be a lucky girl
I hope she treats you like a king,
and makes you her entire world
If we're meant to be together,
I know God will find a way
To bring our hearts together,
For your heart I always pray
If our souls come together as one,
I vow to make this promises to you
I promise to treat you like a king,
Make all of your dreams come true
I promise to support you,
and support all of your dreams
Be so loving and faithful,
Be the girl of your wildest dreams
I promise to devote my life to you,
Pick you up when you feel down
I promise to wipe away your tears,
Make you smile when you have a frown
I promise to always love you,
Like vows til death do us part
I promise to love your family like my own,
and to always take care of your heart
I promise to be an amazing wife,
Be the best mom to our kids I can be
I promise to keep these promises,
If God decides we are meant to be.
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Submitted by Shantilly on June 10, 2021

Modified by Shantilly on June 27, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDEDFGHGHIBDBBJKJBLMLBNONPQRQ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,025
Words 222
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 32

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