Analysis of Promises



I get butterflies in my stomach,
When I talk to you
It's obvious I get really shy,
Hoping you feel the same way to
I think you're perfect and amazing,
Who ever you marry is gonna be a lucky girl
I hope she treats you like a king,
and makes you her entire world
If we're meant to be together,
I know God will find a way
To bring our hearts together,
For your heart I always pray
If our souls come together as one,
I vow to make this promises to you
I promise to treat you like a king,
Make all of your dreams come true
I promise to support you,
and support all of your dreams
Be so loving and faithful,
Be the girl of your wildest dreams
I promise to devote my life to you,
Pick you up when you feel down
I promise to wipe away your tears,
Make you smile when you have a frown
I promise to always love you,
Like vows til death do us part
I promise to love your family like my own,
and to always take care of your heart
I promise to be an amazing wife,
Be the best mom to our kids I can be
I promise to keep these promises,
If God decides we are meant to be.


Scheme ABCBDEDFGHGHIBDBBJKJBLMLBNONPQRQ
Poetic Form
Metre 11100110 11111 110011101 10110111 111010010 11011011010101 11111101 01100101 11111010 1111101 11101010 111111 1101101011 1111110011 110111101 1111111 1101011 0011111 1110010 10111101 1101011111 1111111 110110111 11111101 1101111 1111111 110111100111 01111111 1101110101 10111101111 110111100 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,025
Words 222
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 32
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 815
Words per stanza (avg) 222
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Submitted by Shantilly on June 10, 2021

Modified by Shantilly on June 27, 2021

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