Patiently waiting



My whole life I've had my heartbroken
By men who never cared about me
every day I cried praying to God
to Send Me an Angel to set me free
a man who will always love me
And never do anything to break my heart
someone who will comfort me
 when my world is falling apart
my biggest wish in this world
 is to be a wife and a mother someday
I know one day God will send me my king
who will take all my pain away
until then I'll be patiently waiting
for the man god sends to me
and when that day comes I'll cry happy tears
 cause' I'll be so happy

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I'm patiently waiting for God to oneday send me a good man.

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Submitted by Shantilly on June 27, 2021

Modified by Shantilly on July 25, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBBDBDEFGFGBHB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 538
Words 115
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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