Analysis of In love straight away!

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



A morn worth reckoning
In a misty landscape looking cool
With its trees swaying
When the breeze whistled
Leaving on its path a touch of cold

In the bush by the path I laid
Watching dawn in its most splendid
Wriggling through my youthful mind
And there you appeared
Looking like a rose, freshly picked
With a pot balanced on your head
That was erect, standing proud

You walked like a queen
With legs only fit to walk in heaven
With a swing of your hips
That left me with a stun
I could see your smile, beaming
Bright like the sun!

You kept my gaze boring into you steadily
My mind out of this world
Trying to discern your beauty!
You locked my mind with your figure so lovely
And my heart you imprisoned with your love, honey
I fell head over heels in love with you,
Straight away!

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme AXAXX XXXXXXX XBXBAB CXCCCXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 011100 00101101 11110 10110 101110111 00110111 10101110 111101 01101 10101101 10110111 1101101 11101 1110111010 101111 111101 1111110 1101 111110011100 111111 10101110 11111110110 011101011110 1111010111 101 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 773
Words 153
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 6, 7, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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