Analysis of My lovely lily!



Lain on the back lawn
Leaning on my elbow
Looking at the southern sky
Longing for my love

Dreams of the beautiful picnics
Dread me to turn to mourn
Day of the old sour
Done away with forever

Believe me, she left me
Begging me to ‘move on’
But doesn’t she know
Be no other but her!

Cars knock and die, and
Come to life with a chug!
Come on my lovely lily
Couldn’t we resurrect ours?

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme XAXX XXBB CXAB XXCX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 10111 1010101 10111 1101001 111111 110110 1011010 011111 101111 1111 111010 11010 111101 1111010 110110 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 394
Words 80
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by GIDRAF on May 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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