Analysis of Who Are You To Judge?
People want to say bad things
And judge you for the monster you've become
But they don't know the truth
Of just how bad drugs have made you numb
This is not a story of a criminal
as you all would want to say
It's a sad sad story of a great hearted woman
whose soul was slowly chipped away
She’s been many great things to many people
But all you want to hear is the bad
We know the real person she is inside
Before the addiction, before things turned sad
Every day is like living in a nightmare
When you wake up to a parent you don't know
To know that she is completely gone
The drugs have taken her and have complete control
Do you know how it feels to lose someone you love
To a drug that's more powerful than you?
You feel so helpless against it
You cry, you plea, "Please don't do this! I love you!"
Is it my fault? Could I have done more?
Am I the one to blame?
Why wasn't I just enough?
Questions that haunt me every day.
So go on and judge and make your accusations
Must be nice to be so perfect
No mistakes, no wrong turns
Always right, always correct
Make believe you know more than me
Go ahead and lie about every little bit
Whatever amuses yourselves
Because I really don't give a sh*t!
You don't know the pain she has suffered
The tears she’s cried, she’s taken a toll
We've all had to watch her deteriorate
From the great woman we knew to this lost soul
You are still my mother,
And I'll always be here to support you.
I won't let them beat you down. I'll put up a fight.
I'll do whatever I can to protect you.
I am so lost without you.
Many times I've asked God, "Why?"
But one thing I always know to be true,
I'll love you 'til the day that I die...
Scheme | XAXA BCXC BDXD XXXE XFGF XXXC XHXH IGXI XEXE XFXF FJFJ |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (73%) |
Metre | 1011111 0111010101 111101 111111111 11101010100 1111111 1011101011010 11110101 11101111010 111111101 1101101101 01001001111 10011110001 11111010111 111110101 011100010101 11111111111 1011110011 11110011 11111111111 111111111 110111 1101101 101111001 11101011010 11111101 101111 11101 10111111 1010101100101 1001001 0111011011 111011110 011111001 1111100100 10110111111 111110 011111011 111111111101 1110111011 1111011 1011111 111111111 111101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,652 |
Words | 338 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 118 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
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