My loving hero



You're my hero
Soldier Saint and Soulmate
You're the strongest man
You hold the world and my heart in your hands
You keep me safe from an ocean away
Now I only wish that I could do the same

If you go who will save my soul
Who will be my friend
Who will I console?
If you go who will love me more
Who will wake me up
What will I live for
And if you rise
to heaven before your time
Ask God to speed up mine
Put me at the front of the line
Cause if you go I just don't know.

I'd never find another lover
even if I had to.
Cause I swear to God that I was made for you
Your body is a work of art
My pillow is your shoulder
And i love you oh i love you, i love you
I love you all over
Your the bravest man
Please stay alive for as long as you can.

If you go who will save my soul
Who will be my friend
Who will I console?
If you go who will love me more
Who will wake me up
What will I live for
And if you rise
to heaven before your time
Ask God to speed up mine
Put me at the front of the line
Cause if you go I just don't know.
How I’ll survive with out my loving hero
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Submitted by von_v on May 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abcxxx DBDEFEGHIIA jbkbjkjcc DBDEFEGHIIAa
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,029
Words 241
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 11, 9, 12

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