Analysis of AGING - a note to my wife

Román Ortega-Cowan 1935 (Habana)



Our skin slowly wrinkling
our youths bidding goodbye
Though our rose of love remains
fresh and fragrant in our hearts

Tens of years of sharing ending
Who knows when or what will be
When the last word to be spoken
bids goodbye from you or me

Lives well lived, well shared
We will meet beyond the clouds
One fine day …… to start again?
As I love you beyond our deaths.


Scheme AXXX ABXB XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 10110100 101101 11011101 10100101 11111010 1111111 10111110 111111 11111 1110101 1111101 111101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 359
Words 71
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by Fantasma on May 11, 2021

Modified on March 21, 2023

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