Analysis of Destiny



From:
“Spare moments of time are now Precious moments of Essence”

As we go through life, day to day
We do our best in every way.
With family and friends that help us along, our goals are met just like a song.
In this big world, we lived far apart.
Silent connections were made that began from the heart
We may never know of the one so near,
Do you think that time, may be here?
Some moments are written, some just appear,
Many expressed, some are unclear.
Call it destiny or fate, timing or luck.
You've come into my life, the moment showed up.
Our paths have crossed, now the voices are clear.
I don't want to let go, please stay right here.
Yin and Yang to share, moments to embrace.
The smile that I see, on your pretty face.
Is this destiny or luck, it makes no difference to me.
Those moments stop time, the silent friendship of we.


Scheme XX AAXBBCDCCXXCDEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 1 11011111010110 11111111 1110101001 11000111101101111101 011111101 1001001101101 1110110111 11111111 1101101101 10011101 11100111011 11011101011 10111101011 1111111111 1011110101 0111111101 111001111110011 110110101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 870
Words 162
Sentences 13
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 17
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 322
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Submitted by Lmuroff on May 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lenny Muroff

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