Analysis of Being sinful; we do punish ourselves



I'm in confession that I am sinful
My sins are my negative fuels
I stand here for my forgiveness
Must come to go out of shyness

Nothing more can do than to regret
Some will say; you are a man great
Confession makes me light in weight
In your life you relax in every aspect

Being sinful; we do punish ourselves
Remember its not the motive of God
Don't support wrong doers' illogical talk
That does not legitimize wrong we walk

We're ordered to not to do certain things
God does not benefit out of it no naught
He is compassionate with sense broad
He wants us to live like a king with sword

The purpose of life is to live a peaceful life
Being in sins; make our lives full of strife
Life is a paradise; if we live an ethical life
Brings happiness within us with a surprise


Scheme XXAA XBBX XXCC XXXX DDDX
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1001011110 111110010 11111010 11111110 101111101 11111011 01011101 01110101001 10101110001 0101101011 10111001001 111010111 1101111101 11110011111 110100111 1111110111 010111110101 10011101111 1101011111001 11000111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 751
Words 150
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by Amirul on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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