Analysis of Entering the lake of dreams

Kelly Dale 1973 (Florida)



Entering the Lake of Dreams
At night I leave this place
As I go to the lake of dreams
Abandoning my sacred face
I can hear all the screams
I'm swamping in the fires
Of all my unwanted desires
As I keep searching my marsh of sleep
I've must of come to deep
It has become a nightmare
I try to escape or should I care
It's just it seems or is it real
For it seems the love will never conceal
The day moon shines through
Then I realized it's still true
To share laughter with tears,
Which laughs away imagined fears


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Poetic Form
Metre 1000111 111111 11110111 01001101 111101 1100010 111010010 111101111 111111 110101 111011111 11111111 1110111001 01111 1110111 111011 11010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 503
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 404
Words per stanza (avg) 103
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Submitted by Kellydale73 on May 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kelly Dale

Kelly I'm free-spirited, spontaneous, loving I'm a lover: of Pittsburgh Steelers, my cat named Kitty, & computers Feel: content and at peace at the ocean or camping I give: as much love as possible I fear: rejection, death, fire I would like to see: A better future and less crime and hate. Live: Florida Dale more…

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