Analysis of Else

Muti 1975 (Johannesburg)



Else there’s reason for my sorrow,
else the sun won’t shine today,
else the seasons will not follow
so to sow a sweeter way.
Else for treason, or tomorrow
else what have I else to say?
Suffice my soul is simply hollow
since my heart has run away.


Scheme ABABABAB
Poetic Form Sicilian octave  (25%)
Metre 11101110 1011101 10101110 1110101 1110101 1111111 011111010 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 245
Words 48
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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