Analysis of I Love You, But
You always chose the most inopportune time to use your razor, cutting, broken edge, serrated shred.
Words that slice deeply, creating wounds that never heal, seeping, scabs that never form.
That was the night I decided, standing naked, exposed to your bite, “I love you, but”, still on your breath, hanging heavily in the air.
Then I decided, it was time I walked, scrambled, fleeing, a decade of eggshells crunching beneath my feet.
Now my razor swings it’s path of destruction, lacerating roots, severing dandelion heads, unfettering their seed, releasing you into the wind.
That was the last time I heard them pass your lips, the weight of the celestial heavens lifted from the shoulders of Atlas, releasing me onto the wind.
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Metre | 1110100111111010101101 11110010111011011101 11011101010011111111111110100001 111011111101000111100111 1110111101011100100111101010101 1101111111101100101010101011001011001 |
Characters | 734 |
Words | 122 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 6 |
Letters per line (avg) | 96 |
Words per line (avg) | 20 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 96 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
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